I, at seventeen,
grand star of that film inside my head,
am spilling light into the yard
while peering out into the night
from my room amidst the trees.
I want a word to break my fall,
so I take a word and I take one more
and I take a third, and from those words
I begin to write a brand new poem
in the notebook on my thigh.
I, at seventeen,
am turned in and in like origami
am surely no one’s pretty baby
am foul and sharp and full of points
am already on and gone—and gone
to whatever lays beyond the trees
to history stretched across my knees
a word and a word and a third word still,
yet none of it enough.
I, at seventeen,
watch two thousand faces light
like torches when I dance onto the stage—
to the band’s bright haunting jig.
Then I turn and pause mid-flight to flaunt a grin
to hear ’em roar and when I land,
I’ll hit that beat and they’ll roar again.
Off I’ll go into the wings,
sweating, pinched, a bit more broken,
catch my breath and back out again—
a-one, and a-two, and a one-two-three.
Then I fly.
I, at seventeen,
can jab an elbow in your throat.
Don’t walk up on me way too fast.
Don’t you come up on my six.
I am small but too damn quick.
I can fight you f—king dirty:
I will kick your kneecaps backward.
I will **** your ****ing world up.
So keep your distance. Yeah, you heard me.
I, at seventeen,
washing dishes in the kitchen,
catch my face flit in the window
just above the soap-slicked sink—
I’m pale and worried, framed by night.
I’m so much sadder than I should be.
The glasses clink, submerged in water.
I dance a step and shake my head.
I turn and dance another step.
I want a word to break my fall.
Oh my lord, I’m seventeen.
A-one, and a-two, and a one-two-three.
Off I fly.
I knew you…these words capture you, an essence in a bottle of words.
Thank you. <3
This poem took my breath away. This is absolutely brilliant. I want to print it, frame it, let everyone who walks in my house experience your “I, at Seventeen.”
Sincerely,
Reagan
You are too kind! Thanks! (I’m sorry this response is a billion years late.)
Beautifully captured thoughts; emotion-provoking.
Aw, thanks!